40 comments on “Not Of This Earth

  1. Secrets says:

    Ben, I love that you discover her true form only upon seeing her shadow, it adds to the otherworldly of it all. Beautiful write.

  2. Diana says:

    Lovely, Ben๐ŸŒน

  3. wardah says:

    I love the imagery you include! Amazing!

  4. Absolutely beautiful. The mention of shadows brings a certain sense of secrecy. I loved reading this โค๏ธ

  5. Alina says:

    Ooooh, this one’s nice! Beautifully written!

  6. Lia says:

    Benjamin, I love the way this makes it so clear that muse is an “otherworldly” or ephemeral phenomenon. Perfect! You always seem to pack a lot of meaning into few words, and it gives inspiration to others to write and ponder more. Part of what I love about your poetry!

    • bejamin4 says:

      Yes, exactly. This person is out of this world. Or rather they are in the world but not of it entirely. Thanks. That means a lot. Very kind compliments. Hope you’re doing well!

      • Lia says:

        Even your comments about this entity are romantic. It’s captivating! :)) As for me, I was not feeling well at all a couple of weeks ago, but doing better now. Thank you so much, and hope you are well too!

      • bejamin4 says:

        This entity, haha. This entity is romance itself, I’m certain. Sorry to hear this about your health. I’m glad you’re feeling better, now. Do take care. And I’m fine thanks.

      • Lia says:

        Then this entity/person is you, perhaps! :)) Glad to hear you’re fine… thanks again, and take care, likewise. :))

      • bejamin4 says:

        No, it’s not me at all. But maybe soon if I take Yassy’s advice. Thanks again. Be safe ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. judeitakali says:

    Nicely done ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿพ

  8. yassy says:

    So you got to develop your own pair of wings , Ben. Fly with her.

  9. Shadow signifying the true self…loved the idea…๐Ÿคœ๐Ÿค›๐Ÿค˜๐Ÿค˜

  10. Beautiful… It brings out a sense of ethereal feeling !!

  11. Poetpas says:

    Good one โ˜๐Ÿป

  12. Kritika says:

    Angel it is. Bliss in the words.

  13. gabychops says:

    I love the poem. It is creating a magical image, and just saying the words – the pale moon brings the atmospheric image to mind.

    As for the alien/angel/muse, without a doubt, they live on the moon. But on the night of a full moon, do be careful, you may disappear, never to be seen again.

    Thank you.

    Joanna

  14. gabychops says:

    Re-reading is as good as it was the first time around. Thank you.

    Joanna

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