By Benjamin Grossman & Ace
The mirror of my soul dissolves my flaws
While my heart’s vibration draws
Its inner handwriting breaks fear’s barricade
And together we dive deep into love’s cascade
A graceful night above
Our harmony raising the frequency
Auras ascend, we fly like a dove
On the light of constellations, soaring peacefully
Toward the bloom of time
This journey is an eternal climb
The roots of emotions
Are the bravest oceans
A magical connection
The creation of love’s reflection
We are one, an immortal team
Spinning through this life’s infinite dream
What a pleasure it was working with Ace! Make sure you check out her blog Fearless Free Soul. She’s always posting something that makes me feel better about the world.
Aww Ben, thank you so much for your kind words and for this awesome experience!!! It was such a pleasure writing with you too, the first of many I hope!!! I absolutely love this piece, it came together so magically!!! Much love, my friend 🖤🤗
You’re welcome! Thank you as well. Glad we got the chance to put our words together. It did come together very organically (I agree with you). I bet we’ll find more opportunities in the future to collaborate. Peace and love to you! Stay safe! 🙂 🖤
I am so glad too!! Yes, organically is the perfect word!! It’s so cool to see everyone’s thoughts on it! Here’s to our future!! Stay awesome 🖤🤗
Yes, glad we managed to create this poem. I’m sure the future will bring even better things. Thanks again!!!! Have a great night! 🙂
A lovely fusion 🙂 I really like: the roots of emotions are the bravest oceans, bravo!
Thanks! I’m glad you picked out those lines. “bravest oceans” was such a good add by Ace. Glad to have written with her. Thank you again! 🙂
You’re most welcome 🙂
🙂
I love, “We are one, an immortal team”. ❤ Well, the whole poem is wonderful. Nicely done you two!
Thanks. Ace really has a great sense of poetical direction. She was always finding ways to make the words better and better. Appreciate watching her process. And thanks for taking time to read and comment! It’s awesome to see which parts stand out to readers!
Honestly, it all stood out. 😊
Thanks again 🙂
Such a fluid collaboration, as if one poetic mind poured out on the page. Immortal teams are more than love matches..There are creative collaborative immortal teams that just write wonderful poetry, every time they get together, or create videos, or build 3 D virtual worlds.. You two have a natural synchronicity in your writing.. Hope you will do more.
This is awesome to hear! You’re right about it: “immortal teams are more than love matches”. I just love your perspective: “creative collaborative immortal teams”. I can’t tell you enough how much I appreciate your words of wisdom. I feel I’m always learning a lot when I get to talk with you. Hope you’re having a great week!
Well done. A very successful collaboration. 🙂
Thanks, Lynette! Really happy how this one came together 🙂
Beautiful poetry
Thank you!!!
It’s a pleasure
Interesting poem; still turning that opening line around in my mind.
Thanks. It’s neat when a poem can stick with us a bit after reading! I like hearing your thoughts on all things poetry and life!
It’s just the grey hair talking, lol. You are welcome.
A powerful and descriptive poem. I love the phrase “We are one, an immortal team”, very cool. Great work both of you 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Yeah, it’s great: agreed. Ace is ace! Ace is awesome! Thanks a lot, Secrets! 🙂
Amazing!!!!!
Thanks, Rishika!
Pleasure’s mine! 😀
Love the gracefulness of this poem💖😍
Thanks so much, Judy!!!! 🙂
What a gorgeous collab between two gorgeous souls…. the last stanzas are particularly beautiful, true-love-universal, uplifting and timeless. The image with it is perfect. I love it. 🤟💗👌
You summarized it so well. You really got at the heart of the poem. Thanks for everything!!! I got lucky to work with Ace, because she’s both talented and very kindhearted.
Thank you for that… yes Ace is amazing, a beautiful presence in this world, and indeed very talented and utmost kind. Well done to both of you. 😚😚🙏💖
I agree with you: Ace is one of the loveliest souls in the world. Much thanks! 💖 🙂
A wonderful collaboration, congratulations to you both. Look forward to reading more!
So nice to hear that! Thank you!!!
Great work guys!
It is a masterpiece! I wasn’t able to tell whether it was written by two people, though yea, it did look like a diversion from your usual type of poetry.
Lovely!
Thanks big time. Really glad you found beauty in this piece! Sincere gratitude. Hope you’re feeling fully better!
:)))
Beautifully evoked
Super. Thanks!
It’s a pleasure
🙂
Another beautiful collaboration! Well done! So many beautiful words 💫
Thanks, Sirishty. Always look forward to reading on your thoughts on just about anything. 🙂
It’s my pleasure Benjamin. That’s kind of you to day, 😀
I always enjoy reading your poems and ideas you come up with. Keep writing!🍀
🙂 Nice hearing from you. Hope you’re having lots of sunshine your way. Stay safe, stay wonderful! Four-leaf clovers: my favorite. Thanks again. 🍀
To you too Benjamin,🙏😁 Stay safe
a really interesting collab and i love this line so much “The mirror of my soul dissolves my flaws
While my heart’s vibration draws”
Thanks very much!!! Ace writes with great intention, so it’s easy working with her.
Very beautiful image and poetry 💙💙
So nice to hear! Thank you, thank you! Cheers to Ace! 💙
😊❤
Beautiful poem and I love the image ❤
Thanks so, so much! Glad you enjoyed reading this collab!
Beautiful romance.
Lots of thanks!!!
Love ❤ never ends✌️
Never, yes! 🙂
Love and Soul are same or not? Loved this poem Benjamin
Yeah, they are the same in many ways, with some some small differences. But they all flow together into one another as well. Thanks for that. Was fun writing this one with Ace. Thanks for reading again!
Love this poem!! It’s an awesome collab, and I love the rhyme scheme! 👏
Thanks!!! Your words lift me up! Ace has such a way with her words. Thankful to learn from her process.