I would have
Like Medea
Cut my brother into pieces and
Scattered his remains
I would have
Like Cronus
Eaten my own
Children
I would have
Like Icarus
Flown toward the sun
With waxed wings
I would have
Like Sisyphus
Pushed the boulder
Up the hill forever
I would have
Like Prometheus
Stolen the gods’
Fire
I would have
Like Ajax
Fallen upon
My own sword
I would have
If only you had
Crossed a puddle
For me.
Wow .. nice 👍
🙂
Man you are romantic. Kinda swoony. Gives nice feelings to read. 💔
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Anytime and every time. :)) Thanks for writing.
Beautiful as always 💜
Thanks 💜
Damn Mr. Grossman… 👌
🙂
Powerful!!!! You love deep and few have that capacity. Your writing literally causes an ache in my hopeless romantic heart.
Thanks. You’re very kind to say so. That means so much to me. Talk soon!
Good one Benjamin ✍🏻
Thanks!
What can I say Benjamin….just beautiful 👌
Thank you. I appreciate it!
I love this! Absolutely love it!
Thanks. That’s really nice of you to say!
So true. Well done.
THANKS! Enjoy your weekend!
So beautiful, Benjamin💖. I love mythology’s drama, you’ve encapsulated the beauty of those stories in a very modern way. I love this poem🌹
Thanks, Judy! Mythologies are rich with beauty and drama. You’re so correct.
You’re welcome, Benjamin 🤗🌷
That last stanza makes the heart drop. Sometimes we’re willing to do so much for someone, while wishing they would do something so simple for us. This is a beautiful poem, Benjamin. Heartfelt and moving!
I’m back here for a second hit, since nothing new today yet (ahem, I believe we are all waiting)… ;)) Btw I think Brandi S. said it best… 👆👆👌🌷👏
Haha thanks for this comment. I hope I can live up to the pressure.
Such an unexpected ending! I love it. 😀
Thanks so much!
You’re welcome. 🙂