We speak in sonnets
Our hands the couplets
Kissing haikus
And amid the dark we compose
These rhythmic stanzas
Because at some point
We stopped making love
And started making poetry
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Benjamin Grossman 
Utterly beautiful! 👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼
Thanks!!!
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Sensual and brilliant! Clever use of language too
Thanks!
Wowzer .. brilliant mind. You raising the bar around here, Benjamin!!
Thanks, really!
Cool 😎
Lovely. 🙂
Thanks! 🙂
Yes! Clever… I like it!!
Thanks, Tara!
Beautiful poem Benjamin! Poetry is a more honest appreciation and expression of love and life. Beautifully expressed! 🙌
That’s right. Sounds like the start of a philosophy of poetry. A very good starting point you’ve created to define it. Thanks for sharing your thoughtful thoughts as always!
Outstanding 👍🖤
Huge thanks!
You’re most welcome.
I loved this 🖤
Speaking to each other in poetry is like mental love making in a way…😁. A piece of great work Benjamin!
You’re right: Intellectual stimulation is where it all begins. “Mental lovemaking” is a cool idea. Thanks.
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Wow, Benjamin!
Impressive!
Thanks!
I am sorry I missed your name there, Bejamin 🙂
No worries 🙂 And you had my name correctly the first time!
Oh! that makes me feel better, but your profile is bejamin4. Never mind, will start using Benjamin 🙂
Yeah, it’s just the profile name from when I made it years ago. But I’m definitely just Benjamin. Bejamin is an old nickname, though, from when I was a kid.
Ah, makes sense. I love that you used your childhood nickname; a connection to your past, your innocence. 🙂
Ben, what a beautifully crafted image of what love can be like. Poetry in motion as they say 👏
Thanks for that!
You’re welcome!
Love the metaphors! Always on point! The last line is perfect 🙌
Big thanks! 🙂
You’re welcome!
Love the passion!
Thanks! Glad you could relate to this!
Love this. It did not go where the title lead me to believe. Wonderful write!
Thanks! I was hoping the title would the key to the piece, a kind of pull in. Thanks again! Enjoy your Monday!
Welcome. You too!
Wow this is fabulous.
THANK YOU!
Welcome 🙂
A poetic masterpiece~
Thanks for your kind words!
Truly enjoyed it~
Sensuous poetic love…. outstanding piece Ben 💙
Thanks so much!
Gorgeous, the way you mentioned the forms and the relations. 👌🏾
Thanks. Appreciate it!
it is at this moment I knew I love itttt
Huge thanks for reading and commenting!
hahaha always a fan of your poems
Thanks again!
Truly beautiful!
Thank you!
Most welcome!
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So lovely and creative, Benjamin! I especially love the first three lines. Very satisfying to say. 😊
Thanks a lot. Probably my favorite lines, too. 🙂 Have a great start to your week!
I love your use of words here, Benjamin. A completely delightful piece with such immense emotions. ❤️✨
Thanks, thanks! Have a wonderful week ahead!
Those last two lines hit the heart! ♥️
Good to know this!
Absolutely beautiful…..forgotten what it was to rhyme ❤ Absolutely wonderful, Ben.
Thanks a lot!
This is masterpiece💓
Very neat, bro! 👌♥🌹
Thanks a lot! Sorry for the late reply, randomly this comment went to spam. Appreciate you taking the time!
That’s alright! It happens to me too!🙏😊