Discovered your shadow
along the wall
in the pale moonlight
It was the shape
of a heart with two wings
So it goes without saying
you’re not of this Earth.
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Benjamin Grossman 
Ben, I love that you discover her true form only upon seeing her shadow, it adds to the otherworldly of it all. Beautiful write.
Thanks. I appreciate your thoughts!
Lovely, Ben🌹
Thanks 🙂
I love the imagery you include! Amazing!
Thanks! And thanks!
You’re welcome!
Absolutely beautiful. The mention of shadows brings a certain sense of secrecy. I loved reading this ❤️
Thank you, Rishika!
Ooooh, this one’s nice! Beautifully written!
Thanks very much!
Benjamin, I love the way this makes it so clear that muse is an “otherworldly” or ephemeral phenomenon. Perfect! You always seem to pack a lot of meaning into few words, and it gives inspiration to others to write and ponder more. Part of what I love about your poetry!
Yes, exactly. This person is out of this world. Or rather they are in the world but not of it entirely. Thanks. That means a lot. Very kind compliments. Hope you’re doing well!
Even your comments about this entity are romantic. It’s captivating! :)) As for me, I was not feeling well at all a couple of weeks ago, but doing better now. Thank you so much, and hope you are well too!
This entity, haha. This entity is romance itself, I’m certain. Sorry to hear this about your health. I’m glad you’re feeling better, now. Do take care. And I’m fine thanks.
Then this entity/person is you, perhaps! :)) Glad to hear you’re fine… thanks again, and take care, likewise. :))
No, it’s not me at all. But maybe soon if I take Yassy’s advice. Thanks again. Be safe 🙂
Nicely done 👌🏾
Thanks!
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🙂
So you got to develop your own pair of wings , Ben. Fly with her.
It’s a good idea. I must do this. Thanks for the advice! You always think out of the box. I appreciate this.
You welcome, B. I would so love to see a fairy Ben. But please , you must have a magic wand. Sprinkle stardust on all us mere mortals. Lol seriously , look , I want to see a happy ending to your story 😂
Thanks. You’re very kind. A happy ending would be nice!
Of course. I want to hear you say your vows,.
Sweet!
Thanks so much!
Welcome!
Shadow signifying the true self…loved the idea…🤜🤛🤘🤘
Thanks, my friend!
Always a pleasure…🤜🤛
Beautiful… It brings out a sense of ethereal feeling !!
Good one ☝🏻
Thanks!
Angel it is. Bliss in the words.
Thanks. An angel, indeed.
I love the poem. It is creating a magical image, and just saying the words – the pale moon brings the atmospheric image to mind.
As for the alien/angel/muse, without a doubt, they live on the moon. But on the night of a full moon, do be careful, you may disappear, never to be seen again.
Thank you.
Joanna
Thanks a lot! I’ll keep that advice in mind. The moon controls the tides within us, for certain. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Re-reading is as good as it was the first time around. Thank you.
Joanna
The title and the poem are stunning!