70 comments on “We Stopped Making Love

  1. Tom says:

    Utterly beautiful! πŸ‘ŒπŸΌπŸ‘ŒπŸΌπŸ‘ŒπŸΌ

  2. asthaisha says:

    πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

  3. Nitin says:

    Sensual and brilliant! Clever use of language too

  4. yassy says:

    Wowzer .. brilliant mind. You raising the bar around here, Benjamin!!

  5. tara caribou says:

    Yes! Clever… I like it!!

  6. uzzawal1911 says:

    Beautiful poem Benjamin! Poetry is a more honest appreciation and expression of love and life. Beautifully expressed! πŸ™Œ

    • bejamin4 says:

      That’s right. Sounds like the start of a philosophy of poetry. A very good starting point you’ve created to define it. Thanks for sharing your thoughtful thoughts as always!

  7. Outstanding πŸ‘πŸ–€

  8. Cassa Bassa says:

    Speaking to each other in poetry is like mental love making in a way…😁. A piece of great work Benjamin!

  9. Msdedeng says:

    Wow, Benjamin!
    Impressive!

  10. Msdedeng says:

    I am sorry I missed your name there, Bejamin πŸ™‚

  11. Secrets says:

    Ben, what a beautifully crafted image of what love can be like. Poetry in motion as they say πŸ‘

  12. wardah says:

    Love the metaphors! Always on point! The last line is perfect πŸ™Œ

  13. V.J. Knutson says:

    Love this. It did not go where the title lead me to believe. Wonderful write!

  14. Kritika says:

    Wow this is fabulous.

  15. Sensuous poetic love…. outstanding piece Ben πŸ’™

  16. judeitakali says:

    Gorgeous, the way you mentioned the forms and the relations. πŸ‘ŒπŸΎ

  17. it is at this moment I knew I love itttt

  18. -Eugenia says:

    Truly beautiful!

  19. πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

  20. Katy Claire says:

    So lovely and creative, Benjamin! I especially love the first three lines. Very satisfying to say. 😊

  21. I love your use of words here, Benjamin. A completely delightful piece with such immense emotions. ❀️✨

  22. Those last two lines hit the heart! β™₯️

  23. tornadoday says:

    Absolutely beautiful…..forgotten what it was to rhyme ❀ Absolutely wonderful, Ben.

  24. Inshoimran says:

    This is masterpieceπŸ’“

  25. Diana says:

    Very neat, bro! πŸ‘Œβ™₯🌹

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