Heartstrings

If you’re ever interested
In hearing the sound
Of a broken heart
Just spend one moment
Around me without her

24 comments on “Heartstrings

  1. Lovealwayskath's avatar alwayswithlovekat says:

    Aww 😢

  2. hasanthepoet's avatar Hasan Adan says:

    Thats what true love have you feeling either after the relationship ends or you think you lost her/him. This was a joy to read benjamin.

  3. Poetpas's avatar Poetpas says:

    Endearing

  4. scifihammy's avatar scifihammy says:

    Aw This is sweet. 🙂

  5. thefragrancewriter's avatar Jay Bleu says:

    I can hear from here, brother

  6. Cassa Bassa's avatar Cassa Bassa says:

    Succinct and potent, excellent!

  7. rosesandremedies's avatar wardah says:

    👏 👏 👏
    Love it, it’s so short yet powerful. I know that feeling, the pain of being away from those you love. Well done!

    • Benjamin Grossman's avatar bejamin4 says:

      Yes, it’s a different kind of pain. Not much else really like it. If it’s real and true ot’s hard to be away from that person whether it’s 1 hour away or 18.

      • rosesandremedies's avatar wardah says:

        You describe it so well. We’re lucky we have technology to keep in touch with those people, but it’s always so much better to see them in person!

      • Benjamin Grossman's avatar bejamin4 says:

        Yeah. You’re right again. Technology is great. But it’s still not the same as face-to-face. Nothing can really take the place of that!

  8. Ash Ochoa Poetry's avatar Anonymously Hal says:

    Oohhh!!! ❤️❤️❤️

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