Undisputed Truths (Sunrises and Sunsets)

Might be falling
Too dark for positives
Surrounded by
Blurs my eyes
Can’t ever adjust to
Thought stars
Rose in the east
Set in the west
Appears that wasn’t true
The facts are:
My sun rises and sets solely
Upon the position of you

28 comments on “Undisputed Truths (Sunrises and Sunsets)

  1. wardah says:

    Wow, this is so beautiful! Love the images of the stars and sun, it really brings this whole piece together. I absolutely love this line, “Too dark for positives.” Amazing! 👏👏👏

  2. Beautifully done. 🙂

  3. Cassa Bassa says:

    I have never thought personal bias can be so beautiful 🤠.

  4. Katy Claire says:

    So lovely, Benjamin ♥️ Always inspired by your romantic writes 🥰

  5. Bernadine says:

    Aw very sweet 🙂

  6. I love this : “My sun rises and sets solely
    Upon the position of you”

    Gorgeous writing as always, Ben. Your words never fail to amaze me ❤️

  7. Kritika says:

    Beautiful write. A different style and it is lovely.

  8. -Eugenia says:

    A beautifully written piece, Benjamin!

  9. This is so beautifully written Ben…may I add as always 😊

  10. So hopelessly romantic ♥️♥️♥️ Well done!!

  11. That sure left an impact…
    “solely upon the position of you…”
    very relatable…
    nothing else matters, right…
    Beautiful words… :))

  12. Diana says:

    Sweet verse ♥🌹

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