Might be falling
Too dark for positives
Surrounded by
Blurs my eyes
Can’t ever adjust to
Thought stars
Rose in the east
Set in the west
Appears that wasn’t true
The facts are:
My sun rises and sets solely
Upon the position of you
Might be falling
Too dark for positives
Surrounded by
Blurs my eyes
Can’t ever adjust to
Thought stars
Rose in the east
Set in the west
Appears that wasn’t true
The facts are:
My sun rises and sets solely
Upon the position of you
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Daydreaming and then, maybe, writing a poem about it. And that's my life.
Stories that began in the heart of the South African lowveld.
Artist, Poet, Writer
A lover of words
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Wow, this is so beautiful! Love the images of the stars and sun, it really brings this whole piece together. I absolutely love this line, “Too dark for positives.” Amazing! 👏👏👏
Thank you! I think that’s a interesting line, also. Enjoy your Sunday!
Beautifully done. 🙂
Thank you 🙂
I have never thought personal bias can be so beautiful 🤠.
That’s really such an interesting comment! I see exactly what you mean. And thanks so much!
This is so amazing.
Thanks!
You’re welcome!
So lovely, Benjamin ♥️ Always inspired by your romantic writes 🥰
Thank you, Katy. That’s like a hug to the heart 🙂 Have a great day!
Aw very sweet 🙂
Thanks a lot! 🙂
I love this : “My sun rises and sets solely
Upon the position of you”
Gorgeous writing as always, Ben. Your words never fail to amaze me ❤️
Thanks you entirely. 🙂
Beautiful write. A different style and it is lovely.
Thanks!
A beautifully written piece, Benjamin!
Thanks big time!
This is so beautifully written Ben…may I add as always 😊
Thanks a lot! 🙂
So hopelessly romantic ♥️♥️♥️ Well done!!
Thank you!!!
That sure left an impact…
“solely upon the position of you…”
very relatable…
nothing else matters, right…
Beautiful words… :))
You’re right: nothing much else. Thanks so much for taking the time. Safe stay!
You too :))
Sweet verse ♥🌹
Thanks, Diana!!!