Not the avalanche of twilight
Nor the moonbeam mist
Or the rain-wrapped clouds above
But a poetic movement
A mythical magical dream
A first and only
Some high and higher
Some better and best
Some always and never
Your love has no lows
No descents, no plateaus
No warnings, no dangers
That should be said another way
(Or in endless ways, really)
So let’s try it again
Your love has no phases
No halves, no slivers, no waning
It’s just full, complete, swoony … like when the sky supports the whole of the moon
Benjamin Grossman 
“like when the sky supports the whole of the moon” you save the best for last!!!
Oh thanks!!! Glad that part connected with you!
Now, that is the true LOVE! Very beautiful, Benjamin, but why cannot we see the lucky girl who inspired such poetry?!!
Joanna
Thanks again. I think we can see her in and through the words. But, I will say she’s much more beautiful than any word in existence. Thanks again for reading and commenting.
“But a poetic movement
A mythical magical dream
A first and only”
Stunning and beautiful, I love this one!!!!
Thanks for the support, Wardah. All the best to you.
The opening lines really hooked me, Benjamin. This is wonderful.
Thanks. Appreciate your thoughts, V.J. Always nice to hear from you!
Welcome!
🖤
🙂
Beautiful closing. 🙂
Thanks a lot!
Wow, just amazing writing Benjamin!! I always look forward to your posts, they always touch my heart! Keep shining and spreading love friend 🖤💫
Thank you, thank you. 🙂 Means a lot to hear this! Stay safe out there!
The last stanza rocks!
Thanks, Alina!
Sweet!
Thanks!!!
Stunning lines, and with an absolutely swoony last stanza. It’s like the poem writes about itself… :))
HUGE THANKS!
Lovely words. Loved it❤️❤️
Thanks a whole lot!
In love — with the deeply enthralling words and you ❤️
❤️ Love always. Thanks for being (incredibly, wonderfully, artfully, and effortlessly) you.
🥰
Magical words… deeply moving…
Thank you, thank you!
Touching poem. So much a love means.
Thanks so much!
Welcome 🙂
I read this poem three times and every time I just couldn’t help but smile. It is a perfect piece just like your complete, swoony Love. 🙂
Honestly, thank a lot. Makes me smile to hear this. Much appreciation for taking the time to read and comment 🙂
Beautiful
Thank you!!!
You are amazing! So happy to have found your site!!!❤️
Thank you, thank you! I’m glad we got the chance to connect. Hopefully we will more in the future. Stay safe!!!
You’re very welcome. Likewise. Stay safe as well.❤️💕
🙂