Penmanship

I'm 
   losing 
         control 
                of 
                  my 
                    strokes
Wishing to touch you with every word
This inflated script
Once handled with care
Now reduced to scratch

20 comments on “Penmanship

  1. Secret Bree's avatar Secret Bree says:

    Gesh this is good 👏👏👏👏

  2. Succinct and so original Ben! Congratulations..it says so much more than it actually says:)

  3. Wow – well done. Very tight and concise and communicates so effectively.

  4. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall says:

    How interested, Benjamin.

  5. Hi Benjamin,
    Great job! Short and not too sweet 😉
    Blessings!

  6. Ah beautiful! I see my own passionate, trembling fingers typing, trying to access with words what I couldn’t with my hands. Very impactful. 🙂

  7. Lia's avatar Lia says:

    This is so beautifully done. Moving and masterful poetry 👍🙏👏

  8. vintageblack's avatar vintageblack says:

    This is brilliant, Ben!!

  9. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz says:

    Love the title, the form and the brevity. Nice one, Ben!

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