In The Beginning

When I saw you
my world expanded,
literally, for you were
an undiscovered galaxy
with the most breathable air
and the prettiest stars.

However, when you saw me,
you just thought of one
big bang.

13 comments on “In The Beginning

  1. This is really good πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘

  2. Hasan Adan says:

    Benjamin this is amazing especially the contrast from seeing the wonders and beauty in someone else versus them seeing you in a different light.

  3. bejamin4 says:

    Thanks. I always appreciate your thoughtful comments: the way you broke that down was really exceptional.

  4. V.J. Knutson says:

    Oh dear…no wonder relationships are so difficult…

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