What I Really See

Not your hips swaying
to the rhythm of love

or your full lips pressed
gently to an apple

Not even your breasts
nestled into cleavage

But rather extensions
as in roots and branches

and tall family trees
with fruits overhanging abundantly

But also ceilings and walls
and floors and fences

Or rather my future
set in stone.

17 comments on “What I Really See

  1. Ben, those last lines… Gorgeous πŸ‘ŒπŸ’œ The whole piece is well written, but you killed with the ending.

  2. Cassa Bassa says:

    Amazingly brilliant Benjamin! There is no line lack of fullness.

  3. Beautifully done. πŸ™‚

  4. JUST EKTA says:

    W 😍 W !! well articulated

  5. tara caribou says:

    Oh now this is quite lovely.

  6. Beautiful. Well penned!!

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