Bridges (A Semi-Visual Poem)

I would cross

Each one of these

Without fear

To reach you:

Tell me you’d

Do the same

Even if you were

Pregnant with fear.

17 comments on “Bridges (A Semi-Visual Poem)

  1. rosesandremedies's avatar wardah says:

    As someone who has a little fear of heights, I probably wouldn’t haha! Great poem and video! 🙂

    • Benjamin Grossman's avatar bejamin4 says:

      I understand what you mean. I’m not sure I could do half of these. But maybe it depends on what or who is waiting for you on the other side. I don’t really have a fear of heights, after all, I just have a fear of falling.

      • rosesandremedies's avatar wardah says:

        That’s a really good point! If someone’s waiting for me, cheering me on, I’d probably be a lot more confident! And a fear of falling is scary indeed.

      • Benjamin Grossman's avatar bejamin4 says:

        “Confidence”: you used the right word. If you feel confident you’ll be more likely to go beyond your normal limits. I think you could do it if you really had to. In the end, we’re always stronger than we think we are (or at least that’s what I’ve noticed).

      • rosesandremedies's avatar wardah says:

        That’s so inspirational!! We really are so much stronger than we believe sometimes. 🙂

      • Benjamin Grossman's avatar bejamin4 says:

        We are 🙂 And let’s not forget it today or tomorrow!

  2. Lia's avatar Lia says:

    I’m not afraid of heights nor bridges, but this one brought back some memories for me of what it’s like to feel “pregnant with fear.” It’s a terrible feeling… and nearly the opposite of love, and/or of hope… but then opposites often go hand in hand. If someone were to reach that hand… but it’s so hard to do that, and sometimes I guess it has to be us that reaches into the abyss… putting ourselves at risk. It’s very hard to do… but maybe the rewards are greater that way. Then again, timing is everything. Anyway, I love your poetry as always, as lol you must know by now that I do… it always makes me feel, and think. :))

    • Benjamin Grossman's avatar bejamin4 says:

      Feel and thing. That’s the best compliment you can pay forward to a poet. Thanks so much 🙂 And, wow, yes, it’s a terrible feeling to have; deep-felt fear of something happening or likewise something not happening that you really want. Sometimes we can only save ourselves, but sometimes it’s nice to have reach for the only hand that can really save us! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. You have a grand perspective 🙂

  3. thefragrancewriter's avatar Jay Bleu says:

    I like this approach B)

  4. Benjamin Grossman's avatar bejamin4 says:

    Much thanks. Wanted to try something different.

  5. JUST EKTA's avatar JUST EKTA says:

    How profound !! 😊😊

  6. I am a pilot but I don’t like bridges much. I would cross one of those for my M though. 🙂

    • Benjamin Grossman's avatar bejamin4 says:

      Well, that’s all that matters sometimes. If you’re willing to cross for the right things! 🙂 Always interesting to hear your thoughts. And you know how to fly (very impressive!).

  7. VJ's avatar V.J. Knutson says:

    Those are quite the fear-inspiring bridges. Creative Benjamin.

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