Can you imagine
holding the world
in your hands?
Can you really?
Then imagine it now
the world in the palm of your hands
spinning on its axis.
I want you to imagine it.
Close your eyes.
Think on it.
Block out everything else.
Focus. Focus. Focus.
Don’t read on until
You found it—feel it.
Now that you’re there:
You know how
I feel every time
I hold her.
The ending was just out of this world. Absolutely a thrilling feeling Benjamin ❤ !
Oh this is romantic. Love it.
Thank you. And thanks for sharing your thoughts!
Nice one Benjamin 🙌
The fast pace build up and the peaceful ending made a good ride.
So beautiful! I love the way you wrote this one!
You’re just the sweetest. I really like this one. Great ending.
Heavy… and delightful… your poetry is always deeply moving. :))
Thanks so much. It’s a pleasure to have moved you in such way.
I don’t know why… but your dry lines always leave me smiling. :))
Dry wasn’t the feeling I was going for. Maybe you have a crush on my words, but of course I wouldn’t want to assume. However, possibly they’ve replaced George for you. 🙃
Haha I was wishing I could delete that comment just moments ago. Timing… it’s pretty wild. My wording was not great. Wordcrush is better. :)) I’m hopeless at times. But you brew a strong wine. 🥴🙃🤷🏼♀️😉
Exactly a “wordcrush”; this is what I was meaning precisely, but you said it better. The feeling is mutual on this kind of thing. Hopefully you’ll come by again for a sip or two whenever you’re feeling up to it. Do enjoy the rest of your day! 🙂
I’m addicted… so yeah, I keep drinking the whole bottle… and likewise. :))
Wow. Great ending
Thanks so much. Really!
I just knew there would be a worthy clincher at the end.
That was awesome. Loved how you did it. 🙌🍾🤜🤛
Oh wow lovely.. You spin the emotions around with your last few lines…