Your Day

Your day
Shouldn’t be
Just one
Since the love you deserve
Couldn’t be received
In a night and a day
I would start with a month
And a present for each date
Though in my heart of hearts
I celebrate your birth every time I look your way

26 comments on “Your Day

  1. Secret Bree's avatar Secrets says:

    Sweetness itself Ben. That last line… perfection.

  2. yassy's avatar yassy says:

    Good stuff , Benji.

  3. rosesandremedies's avatar wardah says:

    Love the line breaks. Beautifully penned! πŸ‘

  4. Lia's avatar Lia says:

    I agree with Secrets, the last line is perfection. So lovely.

  5. The end line is magical…completing the piece beautifully…

  6. Katy Claire's avatar Katy Claire says:

    This is precious, Benjamin β™₯️ Beautiful work, as always.

  7. Kritika Maheshwari's avatar Kritika says:

    Beautiful lines as always. 😍

  8. cheriewhite's avatar cheriewhite says:

    Beautiful poem dedicated to a child! Love it!

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