26 comments on “Your Day”

  1. Secrets says:
    September 5, 2020 at 12:02 pm

    Sweetness itself Ben. That last line… perfection.

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  2. yassy says:
    September 5, 2020 at 12:22 pm

    Good stuff , Benji.

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  3. radhikasreflection says:
    September 5, 2020 at 1:29 pm

    How lovely Benjamin!

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  4. wardah says:
    September 5, 2020 at 2:13 pm

    Love the line breaks. Beautifully penned! 👏

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  5. Lynette d'Arty-Cross says:
    September 5, 2020 at 4:24 pm

    Lovely. 🙂

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  6. Lia says:
    September 5, 2020 at 4:31 pm

    I agree with Secrets, the last line is perfection. So lovely.

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  7. aweaveofwords says:
    September 6, 2020 at 1:24 am

    The feels 😃

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  8. singhpiyush6089 says:
    September 6, 2020 at 9:21 am

    The end line is magical…completing the piece beautifully…

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  9. Katy Claire says:
    September 8, 2020 at 4:14 am

    This is precious, Benjamin ♥️ Beautiful work, as always.

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  10. Kritika says:
    September 8, 2020 at 9:18 am

    Beautiful lines as always. 😍

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  11. cheriewhite says:
    September 9, 2020 at 9:37 pm

    Beautiful poem dedicated to a child! Love it!

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