29 comments on “When We Collide

  1. tara caribou says:

    Well this is lovely, Benjamin

  2. gabychops says:

    Yes, indeed, light and imaginative

    Thank you.


  3. Never bend
    Nor break
    Only expand horizons…loved these opening lines 👌

  4. wardah says:

    The line breaks are awesome! I love this!

  5. Such beautiful poetry from the beginning to the end. I adore this, Ben! I wonder what four lettered words, hmmmm. Haha! I’ve been so behind on my reading and writing lately. It’s good to be reading your work again!

    • Thanks, Rishika. The words I had in mind were: love, hope, want, need. It’s easy to fall behind, so much to do and so much to read, but don’t worry over it too much. Hope you’re doing well!

  6. V.J. Knutson says:

    Love this one, Benjamin – filled with possibility.

  7. judeitakali says:


  8. Lia says:

    WOW!!!! Reading this I feel like I’m in the love-expander at NREC. Wonderful

  9. ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!!! Beautiful!!!

  10. Chagall says:

    Wonderfully done – the alignment of 4-letter words indeed! —CC

  11. They collide, they revive. Prime thoughts, beautiful poetry 💝 sending love and hugs

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