on the days i breathe her in
i never want to breathe out
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on the days i breathe her in
i never want to breathe out
We only live once. Hence, let's not stop dreaming
Poetry, stories and some random words...
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Benjamin Grossman 
Goodness, Benjamin, what are you taking? You write such sensuous verses that I am having hot flashes!!
Beautiful. Thank you.
Joanna
Nothing illegal; only genuine love. I think there is something to sensuality over sexuality, especially when it comes to art. Thank you!
Benjamin it’s almost like an elixir of life. Something precious and we can’t do without.
That’s the truth, for sure. Love really is everywhere. There must be a reason why almost every expression of art turns back toward it. Love is the story humanity most wants to tell, I think.
Exactly ! It’s almost like we have to complicate love to the point where we start to understand its really a simple concept that brings a sense of peace to any who truly experience it.
Love is peace. Right on! You are a man of great sagacity.
Thanks benjamin
Lovely. 🙂
Thanks 🙂
Clever title
Thanks. Fully-inspired by Michael Jordan’s nickname and fully-inspired by her.
Awesome!
Lovely 💖💖💖💖
Thank you kindly 🙂
Oooo, so simple but amazingly well done! The love in your pieces is palpable 🖤
Thanks! That’s wonderful to hear. 🙂
Oh this is just simply delightful! Little word, simple anology, adopting a classic saying..
You hit all the right notes Ben!!!
THANK YOU! Glad you thought it worked. Hopefully I can those notes again in the future.
Look forward to reading them.
Just sitting here for probably longer than I have any proper right to, breathing this in… There has to be a prize for best two-line poems somewhere… think you would win. <33
That’s very generous of you to say. Perhaps too generous, even. But thanks a lot! Thanks for giving this all your time and energy.
Oh… ok! Sorry. No worries!
No reason to apologize. I had a momentarily lapse in my poetical confidence. (This happens from time to time). So, really, thank you for your constant reliability and support. That’s a very rare thing to find these days. I appreciate your writerly perspective. Have a wonderful Monday!
Ah, ha! That is a huge relief (that I didn’t offend)… thank you. I have that too, quite a lot actually…as can be evidenced by my comment :)) It’s kind of hard not to support your wonderful poetry and you… and I’m sure many would agree… but thanks for the kind words, too. :)) Hope you have a beautiful Tuesday.
It’s a writer thing, I think. We want to be confident but it’s hard to do it all the time. You’re welcome. Stay safe!
Wow.
Thanks, Alina.
Beautiful and wow! One of the best two liners I have read 💙
Thank you, dearly. It was one of those peaceful writing moments that I hope will come back again with another piece.
I bet you will!
Oh wow! ♥️♥️
Thanks for dropping by! Appreciate you liking and commenting on this one. It’s a piece close to my heart.
Thanks to you for posting it! Loved reading it! Keep creating ✨
Mama Mia I love this. How do you come up with this epic succinct lines. Too good.
Thanks a ton! 🙂
Welcome welcome 😀
Wow (Heart)
🙂 Thanks for leaving some words, Kritika!
This is a marvel. Thank you for sharing this unique piece of art. 🙂 🙂
Very romantic. 🌹
Thanks. Appreciative. 🙂
These verses are simple, yet somehow manages to skip a beat of the one who’s reading. Beautiful!
Thank you! That’s so very lovely what you said. I’m very thankful that this resonates. Grateful for your support 🙂
You’re welcome😊
sounds like a sweet perfume
Yes, (I think) the sweetest perfume! Thanks a lot for reading and leaving words!
Of all the poems, I think yours is my favorite haha. You are so good at this
THANKS! Very flattering! Grateful every time I see you here.
Wow! So simple and so impacting! You make everyone who reads this remember a breath of air like this, that they took, in their lifetime. I love it for all it makes us feel, in such few words. Beautiful!
Thanks, Karima. I like to think sometimes we feel that different kind of breaths with certain people around.
Two lines that say so much ❤️
Thanks. ❤️
wow~
Thanks for reading, Cindy!
Amazing, Benjamin. Love this!❤️
Thanks, Grace. This one means a lot to me. Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂