56 comments on “HER AIRNESS

  1. gabychops says:

    Goodness, Benjamin, what are you taking? You write such sensuous verses that I am having hot flashes!!

    Beautiful. Thank you.

    Joanna

  2. Hasan Adan says:

    Benjamin it’s almost like an elixir of life. Something precious and we can’t do without.

  3. asthaisha says:

    Lovely πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

  4. Ace says:

    Oooo, so simple but amazingly well done! The love in your pieces is palpable πŸ–€

  5. Cassa Bassa says:

    Oh this is just simply delightful! Little word, simple anology, adopting a classic saying..
    You hit all the right notes Ben!!!

  6. Lia says:

    Just sitting here for probably longer than I have any proper right to, breathing this in… There has to be a prize for best two-line poems somewhere… think you would win. <33

    • That’s very generous of you to say. Perhaps too generous, even. But thanks a lot! Thanks for giving this all your time and energy.

      • Lia says:

        Oh… ok! Sorry. No worries!

      • No reason to apologize. I had a momentarily lapse in my poetical confidence. (This happens from time to time). So, really, thank you for your constant reliability and support. That’s a very rare thing to find these days. I appreciate your writerly perspective. Have a wonderful Monday!

      • Lia says:

        Ah, ha! That is a huge relief (that I didn’t offend)… thank you. I have that too, quite a lot actually…as can be evidenced by my comment :)) It’s kind of hard not to support your wonderful poetry and you… and I’m sure many would agree… but thanks for the kind words, too. :)) Hope you have a beautiful Tuesday.

      • It’s a writer thing, I think. We want to be confident but it’s hard to do it all the time. You’re welcome. Stay safe!

  7. Beautiful and wow! One of the best two liners I have read πŸ’™

  8. ahiricreates says:

    Oh wow! β™₯️β™₯️

  9. yassy says:

    Mama Mia I love this. How do you come up with this epic succinct lines. Too good.

  10. DiosRaw says:

    Very romantic. 🌹

  11. These verses are simple, yet somehow manages to skip a beat of the one who’s reading. Beautiful!

  12. Jay Bleu says:

    sounds like a sweet perfume

  13. Of all the poems, I think yours is my favorite haha. You are so good at this

  14. Wow! So simple and so impacting! You make everyone who reads this remember a breath of air like this, that they took, in their lifetime. I love it for all it makes us feel, in such few words. Beautiful!

  15. Two lines that say so much ❀️

  16. Amazing, Benjamin. Love this!❀️

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