68 comments on “Totem

  1. gabychops says:

    Now, Benjamin, this is simply brilliant!!

    Do I have to buy a hat now?

    Joanna

  2. asthaisha says:

    Nicee ❀️

  3. That’s a nice one Ben!!

  4. Lia says:

    Honestly you blow my mind every time. Unreal… real… this is just really coincidental for me, as I had a treasured piece of art that I later gained negative associations with, just brought it out again yesterday, and made up my mind to see it with fresh eyes… it’s like this poem embodies it in such an unexpected way. Amazing. I love your poetry.

  5. gabychops says:

    I wonder if you know the English meaning to the question I asked, but perhaps, I was way ahead….

    Joanna

    • Forgive me. I’m not sure what you’re referring to. You’ll have to explain. But maybe I understand now. You’re asking when is the wedding, yes, so you can buy your hat or outfit to it? I wish I could tell you it was tomorrow or yesterday. But, unfortunately, you don’t always get what you want. So only time will tell. And hopefully it brings good news one of these days. Thanks again for your support!

  6. Alina says:

    Short and sweet. πŸ‘

  7. yassy says:

    Good stuff, very cleverly designed and elegantly crafted verse. A simple statement poetically perfectly written..

  8. That is beautiful, Benjamin. πŸ™‚

  9. Ace says:

    Ooo nice piece Benjamin!!! Your words are always simple but so deep and beautiful! I too have always resonated with hawks, majestical creatures! Much love friend πŸ–€

  10. Cassa Bassa says:

    Potent in just a few lines.

  11. DiosRaw says:

    β™₯️

  12. What a beautiful tribute to your beloved! 🌞

  13. Beautiful writing.

  14. Seoul Sister says:

    I love this poem πŸ’–

  15. You have such a well oiled mechanism to capture your thoughts, wrap them cleverly and throw at us. Respect my friend… :))

  16. wardah says:

    I really love this one and the simile of a hawk! Beautiful.

  17. Such an outpouring of love and desire, in so few lines..and yet we all immediately see the truth in that image:) Captivated by love!! This is wonderful Benjamin!!

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