Galaxies Across A Galaxy

By Benjamin Grossman & Ace

I am the birth of the Universe
Spiraling through my soul
I am a galaxy becoming whole
Beyond this life and evermore

A solar system of wombs
A star creating many homes
A heartland that eternally ascends
An emotion that will forever cleanse

The Universe echoing deeply in our veins
Our bodies free of restrains
Breaking through intrinsic chains
Becoming a galaxy’s avenue of many lanes

I am the birth of the Universe
All that flows and spins
A story with no beginning or end

I am a galaxy within
An internal grin
A destiny to begin

Another duet with the fantastic Ace! Make sure you check out her blog Fearless Free Soul.

64 comments on “Galaxies Across A Galaxy

  1. Ace says:

    Thank you so much for the magical experience of writing this, Ben! It’s an honor to work with you…I love the zone we get into! πŸ’«πŸ™ŒπŸ» And I love this piece so much, feels very alive to me!!! Appreciate you, my friend!!!! Here’s to galaxies across a galaxy and many more πŸ’«πŸ€—πŸ’–πŸ–€

    • The collective zone. Yes, it’s cool to reach that. Thanks for sharing your wonderful thoughts and words with me. It’s amazing to see how you think through problems and solutions. To galaxies and teamwork! πŸ™‚ πŸ™ŒπŸ»

      • Ace says:

        Yes it is…awww you’re so kind!!! That means a lot, I’m touched!!! Thank YOU, for the poetry team we make, for always being so encouraging, for your creativity/attention to detail/writing expertise and for always being you!! YES, cheers to that πŸ’«πŸ–€πŸ€—

      • Very sweet of you to say. I appreciate you. Thanks again πŸ™‚

  2. crimsonposy says:

    Beautiful!
    πŸ’œ

  3. I absolutely love this piece. Magical and insightful. Excellent!!Well done Benjamin and Ace!❀️

  4. Benjamin and Ace….This was a superb, seamless thought and I was swept up from the very start and swirled in your cosmic collaboration. Profound, space-time, humankind.. my favorite line is I am the birth of the Universe
    All that flows and spins
    A story with no beginning or end

    What a perfect description of the birth of the Universe..and also of each and everyone of us…some chapters, perhaps , written on levels, we have not learned to perceive…but an ending? Never….

    • Thanks so very much, Karima. I always appreciate your comments and how thought you put into them πŸ™‚ Those lines we crafted together in real time so it was fun to have it come together so naturally. Yes, I like the idea of endless chapters. Thanks again!

  5. Secrets says:

    Great work both of you πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Keep spinning those galaxies.

  6. Cassa Bassa says:

    πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘I totally dig this one guys! What a fantastic collab!

  7. Jeff Flesch says:

    Beautiful poem, my friends. Love it.

  8. We really are β€œa galaxy within.” So many worlds inside the whole. Well said. πŸ™‚

  9. VJ Knutson says:

    Love this – depth and whimsy.

  10. Simmi says:

    “A heartland that eternally ascends
    An emotion that will forever cleanse”
    Beautiful phrases, magical! πŸ™‚

  11. Sunra Rainz says:

    Great fusion! I enjoy all things interstellar. I particularly like the 1st and 4th stanza. ❀ Intriguing image too!

    • The odyssey of space is incredible. I’m with you on interstellar beauty. Thanks for highlighting the parts that worked best for you. So nice to know these things. Many blessings. Have a great start to your weekend! ❀

  12. Aarushi says:

    Ben and Ace, Ace and Ben, this is such a beautiful collaboration!! we’re all made up of five elements and your interpretation of SPACE is so lovely and graceful and profoundπŸ₯°

  13. Diana says:

    Amazing piece, as I told Ace too! Lovely collab… And you both keep getting better and better!! Well done!!β€οΈπŸ™πŸ’–πŸ’

  14. saree says:

    Lovely poem; good narrative. Galaxy within

    • Thanks so much. Appreciate you taking the time to read and comment!

      • saree says:

        It’s actually making my time spending better in the lock down, it’s giving me happier thoughts and makes me relax, good poet, writer, you are

      • Oh, that’s so very nice of you to say! One of the sweetest comments I’ve ever received on my writing. I hope your lockdown goes smoothly; wishing you and your family all the best! Stay safe! It was fun writing this one with another poet, too. Thanks again!

  15. What a damn good collaboration!!!! πŸ™ŒπŸ»β€οΈ

  16. This is magical to read! Beautiful collaboration!
    The concept of universe’s connection with human anatomy, powerful!

  17. Lia says:

    I love it. I absolutely love it. Just beautiful.

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  19. Anonymous says:

    A magnificent write!

  20. KK says:

    It’s another master piece by my two favourite poets. God bless both of you πŸ™

  21. Tom says:

    Love the poem and the accompanying image! Reminds me of an insanely vivid dream I had once. I will see if I can elaborate on that in a poem sometime.

  22. Kritika says:

    A profoundly crafted poetry. Fabulous collaboration. Congratulations!

  23. Love your style, thanks forsharing.

  24. KiVi says:

    Very beautiful poem

  25. HensBlooms says:

    Great collaboration and I love how galaxy is captured in the poem.

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