28 comments on “Renewal

  1. Grace Hakopian's avatar Ace says:

    What a beautiful piece, Ben! I love the deep simplicity here, you truly know how to make words dance together! And I notice the acrostic element here too 😉. Well done on so many levels, my friend. Your posts are always a treat 💚💙

    • Thanks!!! That’s very kind of you. This was a fun piece to put together, perhaps because I had a foundational idea to begin with, which isn’t always the case for the way I write. Always cool to have multiple aspects to one poem. Have a great weekend! 💚💙

  2. Such a wonderful message, expressed so beautifully. Amazing as always, Benjamin.❤️

  3. Diana's avatar Diana says:

    Wow, beautiful Acrostic for Sirishty!! Well done ❤🥰

  4. Secret Bree's avatar Secrets says:

    This is precious 💜

  5. Beautiful tribute and message all in one..Of course it ended on romance:) How could it end on anything else..Ben? Your soul bursts with it:) ❤️🤗

    • Thanks, Karima! Your kindness is contagious ❤️🤗 And, Sirishty is praiseworthy. I’m thankful for her existence in my life. It’s almost like her presence can break bad weather. She’s a four-leaf clover. I’m in peace with her!

  6. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz says:

    A lovely poem, Ben, and a generous ode to the person in question 🙂 I might try this myself, it’s probably the nicest way to pay someone a compliment. You’re such a poet, you really are! 😀

  7. A perfect blend of creative intelligence and a wonderful message Ben 👍🏻

  8. So lovely & so positive! Thanks for sharing, Ben! 🌞

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