28 comments on “Renewal

  1. Ace says:

    What a beautiful piece, Ben! I love the deep simplicity here, you truly know how to make words dance together! And I notice the acrostic element here too πŸ˜‰. Well done on so many levels, my friend. Your posts are always a treat πŸ’šπŸ’™

    • Thanks!!! That’s very kind of you. This was a fun piece to put together, perhaps because I had a foundational idea to begin with, which isn’t always the case for the way I write. Always cool to have multiple aspects to one poem. Have a great weekend! πŸ’šπŸ’™

  2. Wow!!πŸ™ƒπŸ€

  3. Such a wonderful message, expressed so beautifully. Amazing as always, Benjamin.❀️

  4. Diana says:

    Wow, beautiful Acrostic for Sirishty!! Well done ❀πŸ₯°

  5. Secrets says:

    This is precious πŸ’œ

  6. Beautiful tribute and message all in one..Of course it ended on romance:) How could it end on anything else..Ben? Your soul bursts with it:) β€οΈπŸ€—

    • Thanks, Karima! Your kindness is contagious β€οΈπŸ€— And, Sirishty is praiseworthy. I’m thankful for her existence in my life. It’s almost like her presence can break bad weather. She’s a four-leaf clover. I’m in peace with her!

  7. Sunra Rainz says:

    A lovely poem, Ben, and a generous ode to the person in question πŸ™‚ I might try this myself, it’s probably the nicest way to pay someone a compliment. You’re such a poet, you really are! πŸ˜€

  8. A perfect blend of creative intelligence and a wonderful message Ben πŸ‘πŸ»

  9. So lovely & so positive! Thanks for sharing, Ben! 🌞

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