Done Traveling

I always thought
I needed to see
The Eiffel Tower and
The Great Wall of China and
The pyramids in Egypt and
The Hanging Gardens of Babylon
Or at least the pearly gates of Heaven

But that was before
I uncovered your existence
All Seven Wonders of the World
In one five-foot blessing

And now I’m done
I have no urge to travel
Any measurable distance from you

22 comments on “Done Traveling

  1. Cassa Bassa says:

    How beautiful!!!

  2. Such a romantic 💓

  3. Lia says:

    That is the sweetest. Ever.

  4. Lucky to have found her…..Beautiful write Benjamin 🙂 !

  5. V.J. Knutson says:

    As sweet as this is, Benjamin, the mother in me balks.

    • bejamin4 says:

      Haha. That’s such an interesting comment, because it very much shows how many sides of our selves we have. Some of us might think romantic but other parts “balks” at the idea. Thanks for sharing you thoughts. You have me thinking. Perhaps this is what they call “laying it on too thick”

      • V.J. Knutson says:

        I appreciate the romantic in you, Benjamin, and at my age cringe at the urge to have someone fill you up. The mother in me would say travel first and then find your love.

  6. uzzawal1911 says:

    Beautiful lines, and you have portrayed a wonderful feeling. Well done Benjamin 🙂

    • bejamin4 says:

      Yes, that feeling where you don’t want to come down from the clouds. It’s very hard to find that height without love. Thanks so much! I appreciate you leaving your thoughts!

  7. Great post 😁

  8. yassy says:

    So beautifully poignant so beautifully romantic.

  9. Geri Lawhon says:

    So beautiful and lovely. I still want to see the real 7 wonders, but take him with me. Thanks for this gorgeous poem.

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