I don’t love you
I know that now.
Perhaps I did at first
But I’m unsure.
I’ve overthought the subject of us more than once
Concluded only this: I care for you
In a way that far exceeds love’s feebleness
And in words that are yet to even exist.
I don’t love you
I know that now.
Perhaps I did at first
But I’m unsure.
I’ve overthought the subject of us more than once
Concluded only this: I care for you
In a way that far exceeds love’s feebleness
And in words that are yet to even exist.
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Daydreaming and then, maybe, writing a poem about it. And that's my life.
Stories that began in the heart of the South African lowveld.
Artist, Poet, Writer
A lover of words
A Mystical World
Well expressed !
Greatly appreciated!
Ahh… simply beautiful!!
Thank you!
Sigh. Swoon. Arg will you stop this incredible poetry!!! No actually please don’t. I feel I need it in my feed, haha. Kudos to another bit of deeply romantic perfection, Benjamin. (swoon emoji :)).
Thanks. I may never stop. But perhaps it is up to the muse. I’ll let it decide. Swoon emoji, lol, Nice one.
Right… yes muse is moody I suppose. And can raise or plummet spirits from one moment to the next. Sincerely wishing you a limitless supply of good vibes!
Thanks so much. There is one out there that offers a limitless supply of those. Should keep me going until the end of time. God willing.
True! We can always tap into the god force, if we open our hearts. :))
Wise words. Enjoy rest of your day!
It is amazing 😁 Keep writing more.
Thanks a lot. I’ll try, so long as it flows. 🙂
Damn, that took a creative turn! Deep stuff man, amazing as always 🙌
Great appreciation for that. Thank you.
The ending was awesome! I really love the plot twists you have in your poems 👏👏👏
Thanks. Wasn’t thinking of it as a “plot twist”, but you’re right. That was one.
You’re welcome! 🙂
This is amazing. Makes me want to fall inlove again. Kudos Ben! 💛
Thanks. My writerly self is blushing. I hope you will fall again, and sooner than later. 🙂
Yeah! I’ve been waiting for too long.
Hey, if you have the time, I hope you read this: https://alwayswithlovekat.wordpress.com/2020/08/24/now-is-not-forever/
Always have a bit time for your lovely words. Thanks for sharing this with me.
Thank you so much Ben! You deserve the credit. I owe it to you!
Beautuful expressions
stay safe happy healthy and wealthy
Thanks. Same to you!
🙏
Oh wow. A beautiful expression!
Thanks exponentially.
Beautifully expressed 🌻🌻
Something beyond love is…something 🙂 Nice twist – I really was thinking it was another love lost.
This is amazing and truly loving.
THANKS!