Ra was a divine being
And so far I can’t find
Any evidence to support you’re not.
Some say he created us
Through sweat and tears
I’m not saying
You’ve done the same
Yet there are times
I’ve felt baptized in yours
Thought you were the only reason
The gods ever created human beings.
Ancient Egyptians often
Called themselves: “Cattle of Ra”
I’m not ashamed to say
You’re my shepherd
I’d follow you anywhere you lead.
Now, Ra is best known as a sun god
The ruler of both the Earth and sky
And, of course, it’s true you rule mine
But maybe you’re nothing like him
Because the way you shine
Blinds the light.
Benjamin Grossman 
Your best ..simply beautiful.. whoever you are writin for , she’s one lucky girl.
Thanks. Though maybe I’m most lucky to get to write about her. Hope you’ll have a great weekend!
This shines bright Ben…the last verse is just stellar 👌💛
Thank you for the glowing compliment! Much appreciation.
Gods how I’ve missed your poetry. Ra ra. 🎉🎉 Thank the heavens you’re back. 🔆 :)) Feeling “baptized” through witnessing or experiencing another being’s “sweat and tears”… I love that concept. Beautiful write.
Ra, Ra, Ra! For sure. Let’s praise the light of the world. Big thanks. Thanks for always having such nice things to say about my work. Hope you’re having a lovely day!
You’re welcome. :)) Yes let’s indeed. The dark is lovely and all, but the light must also have its say, and makes the day. :)) ☯️ To you and yours, hurray. 🙌💛🙌
The last two lines are amazing, Benjamin! Love the images and historical references. It’s really awesome!
Thanks. Thanks.
You’re welcome!
I didn’t know who Ra was, I was still amused by the poem. By the end you revealed the mystery for me and it all made perfect sense, the last two lines was a strong way to complete the poem. Sounds like Divine love. Well written! 🙌
Thanks! Your take interests me greatly in that you came to it with a blank slate. Glad you still found some value/amusement/joy there. “Divine love”: I think I agree with your assessment. Thanks again!
Hi Benjamin, this is great!! And now the interesting part is – Egypt had been on my mind today (totally random thoughts related to Indiana Jones and Nefertiti. LOL). You are one mind-reading poet. :))
Thanks, really! That’s interesting how that happens. And now you’ve made me think of Indiana Jones; perhaps I’ll watch the second one tonight. And Nefertiti is a very interesting historical figure. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
Pleasure :)!
…and enjoy the second Indiana movie! I liked it though the 1st and 3rd are still my favourites.
Well, I’ll keep it in mind. Somehow I don’t think I’ve ever seen them all in full yet, except for the first one. I’m way behind on my movies.
I watched them all (and rewatched them all) when I was a kid… You do a loooooooooot of great writing so being being behind on movies is no trouble and fully understandable. Enjoy!
Will do! Enjoy your night!
Beautifully done!
Thanks so, so much!
Bejamin, I’ve been meaning to tell you, but you have the most gorgeous poetry that reflects love. I usually get tired of reading so many things about love but your perspective is just amazing. I truly forward to all that you write. Keep up the brilliant work!
Thank you. Really, really, really! I totally get you’re feeling: who wants to always read another silly love poem? I think I avoided them for a long time with this thought in mind. But now I’m sure I’ll always just write another and another, since love doesn’t really ever go out style, after all, and you must follow the muse wherever it takes you. I’m glad for your appreciation and support! Have a lovely evening.
I agree. And there is absolutely no one that writes like you do. Keep it up.
You too!
THANKS AGAIN!!!
Ben, what a beautiful and powerful piece. The worship of Love, you wrote it so a currently 💜
Thanks a lot 🙂
I have no idea why it says ‘currently’ 🤣 My word the typos haha. That should say ‘you wrote it so accurately’
I understand what you mean. That darn autocorrect!
So beautiful, soulful and romantic, Benjamin. This type of love you have written is very special.
Thanks. When the person is special, the love goes toward special naturally, I think.
This was beyond beautiful and so creative! Loved the “Cattle of Ra” lines and the way you ended it was superb! You really have a way with words, Benjamin. Awesome job! 👌🏼👏🏼👏🏼
Thanks, Brandi. I appreciate you. And, you should know that I’m always impressed by your poetry and perspective on life. Have a great Sunday!
That is so sweet of you, Benjamin. I feel the same way about your words, my friend. You are very welcome and thank you so much for the kind wishes! You have a beautiful Sunday!!
Attractive lines.
Thanks!
Beautiful, eloquent and so powerful! Your love shines through each of these sentences. Excellent!
Thanks!!!
Heavy with romance, Beautifully written.
Thanks for your thoughts!
A pleasure
Loved the way you blend mythology in this…
Thank you, my friend! Be safe!
Brilliantly written! The contrasts made it more eloquent.
Thank you! Thank you!
You’re welcome 🙂
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Really really really appreciate all your support!
Very welcome, beauty of a blog.