
Through an endless cycle of embrace
I will go beyond all lovers
And spin your world in reverse
Travel back to a time before myths
Reimagine the universe as the shape of our kiss
Slow
Down
The
Earth
Until the core and mantle flake
Whileholdingtheatmospherewithinreach
Atlas held the celestial spheres on his shoulders
Now you hold them on your hips
And spin my world in reverse
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This poem was a collaboration with Sirishty Thakur. Please, do yourself a favor and check out her amazing poetry on her blog: Thought Loop.
Β© 2021 Sirishty Thakur & Benjamin Grossman
Thanks Benjamin, it always fun working with you. You are creativeπ€πββοΈ
Welcome and thanks again! We’ll have to try and write more in the future! Have a beautiful night! π π
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Wonderful collaboration . Well done. Truly enjoyed.πβ€οΈπ
Thanks a lot! I love working with, Sirishty. She has a wonderful outlook on life. I always learn so much working with her.
My pleasure, Ben. Thatβs wonderful. Will definitely look up her blog. πβ€οΈπ
I love the powerful images you have both painted in this. Bravo, a stunning collaboration ππ
Thank so very much! Was fun writing this one up. Glad you thought it worked! π Have a great and safe week!
Well done!
Thanks a lot!!!
My pleasure!
That is beautiful Benjamin!
Blessings! β€β€
Thanks a lot! I owe a lot of this to Sirishty. She’s a pleasure to write with; and she’s very thoughtful.
Beautifully expressed – such a powerful collaboration. π
Thanks so much! I could say a million great things about Sirishty and her talents.
Great collab!!! I enjoyed reading this, congrats to you both π
Thanks a ton! Glad to have written this with a really fantastic human being!
welcome! π
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
Thanks for this! Appreciate it!!!
Always a pleasure to read and share your posts with followers, My Friend!! Have a great day!
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Thanks again! π Have a great weekend!
Great collaboration between you two and it was a joy to read. Awesome!
Thank you, Hasan! Working with Sirishty is one of the greatest pleasures I’ve had in writing so far. Hopefully I’ll work with her again!
So full of passion! And I love the structure you’ve chosen. π
Thanks! I feel Sirishty and I have poetical brainwaves. It’s really nice that she shares her words with me. Thanks so much again π
Another lovely collaboration. π
Thank you so much! I couldn’t have done any of this without my very wonderful and gifted partner! π
Fabulous collaboration! I love the sounds and the shape of this poem.
Thank you, Chris! I don’t write with Sirishty very often, but it’s always a joy; her mind is rare.
You 2 are a great team!
Thank you! Sirishty’s a wonderful teammate. Very thankful for her!
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Such a wonderful expression of hugs and feelings! Awesome poetry and a stunning collaboration
Thanks so so much! Glad to share with poetical hug with a fantastic poet!
A very sensual collab. I like the visual effect of it as well as the words. Well done! π
Thanks abundantly! I praise Sirishty for this, she knows how to make creativity spring forth. Thanks again π
You’re most welcome π
Wonderfully expressed…loved the words….
Thanks a lot!
while reading this, I think my world is likewise spinning in reverse. It is so well expressed. :))
That’s awesome. I really liked writing with, Sirishty Devi. She’s incredible with her words and ideas!
It must have been wonderful to find and work with people with such incredible ideas. More collabs to come with Sirishty. <33
Yeah, it really is. She’s super, super smart and precise in your thinking. Thanks for your words π
Oh I missed this gem. I found out that over the period of Nov 2021 and Jan 2022, some blog new post notifications didn’t come across so I have missed many posts. This is one of them… π
Thanks! I really loved writing this piece with Sirishty! I appreciate her style and how she crafts her poems. Sorry, I haven’t been too active of late on here. I’ve been super busy on work, but hoping to return in the coming weeks. Hope you’re doing well! I’m certain you’re writing excellent things! I’ll try to check them out as soon as possible! π