Amendments

It’s been written
said and sung:

nothing is sweeter
than a poem

below I’ve rewritten
the factual truth:

there
is
nothing
sweeter
than
a
poem
written
about
you.

16 comments on “Amendments

  1. Grace's avatar Grace says:

    Aww Ben what a beautiful rewrite 😊. So much love and sweetness flowing throughout. Especially love that first line. Always a treat to read your beautiful work 🤍🤗

  2. Beautiful, Benjamin! 🙂

  3. Secret Bree's avatar Secret Bree says:

    Beautiful as always 🙂

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