Love Is A Five Letter Word

I think
I’m choking
On holy water;
Floundering in
The Fountain of Youth;
Struggling with
This noose
Around my heart;
Found an empty
Pot of gold at the end of the rainbow …
Maybe love
Is a five letter word:

17 comments on “Love Is A Five Letter Word

  1. Lia says:

    Whoa… how do you write like this? Felt every word… and hoped it were not true…
    but always glad to read
    the awesome words of you. πŸ’›

  2. bejamin4 says:

    πŸ’› πŸ’› πŸ’› πŸ’› πŸ’›

  3. Cassa Bassa says:

    I thought the word was ‘loved’…but it is another level….great match of choking-noose-death

  4. V.J. Knutson says:

    Love and loss certainly go hand-in-hand. Interesting.

  5. Is it possible to love something that is also sad? Yes? Well, I loved it.

  6. Beautifully expressed.

  7. Poetpas says:

    Good one ☝🏻

  8. Judy Kim says:

    So true, romantic love has broken my heart many times, so now I’m extra cautiousπŸ˜”

    • bejamin4 says:

      It breaks all our hearts 😦 But eventually we find someone who knows how to put the pieces back together, I think. And it’s good to be cautious. But we must be open too so things can come in. You’re a fantastic person; you’ll attract good things. I know it!

  9. What a surprise in the end.. Nicely constructed!

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