Every earthly thing
you (……….) eclipse
and even near stars
shine dark in comparison.
Every earthly thing
you (……….) eclipse
and even near stars
shine dark in comparison.
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Daydreaming and then, maybe, writing a poem about it. And that's my life.
Stories that began in the heart of the South African lowveld.
Artist, Poet, Writer
A lover of words
A Mystical World
Breathtakingly beautiful Ben. 👏
Thanks. Sincerely.
Very nice Ben! A few lines can say a lot..
So true. Thanks!
Lovely poem 👏
Thanks, Alina 🙂
I like the idea of something ’shining dark’ – it’s a great poetic image!
Thanks, Ingrid. Glad you appreciated it!
A beautiful homage to Ra and someone you love.
Thank you for your important message on my post/
Thank you.
Joanna
Thanks a lot! Much praise to, Ra. And cheers to anyone who can find a second sun. And you’re welcome. Thank you again as well.
Infinite hearts for the profound, amorous and soulfully poetic words! ❤️
THANKS!!! Infinite hearts back to you. May you always feel the poetry of love wherever the world takes you.
❤️
❤️❤️❤️
“Shine dark” – a great image!
Huge thanks!
Beautiful 🖤
Thank you!
You’re welcome 🖤
Love it in particular the title.
Thanks, Cassa!
Such a statement of love whispered through your poetic words…each one chosen, like the flowers in a bouquet to delight and let someone very special know, how loved they truly are!! So beautiful!
Thanks. That’s what I was hoping to achieve. And: I like the poetry of your comment. Your words always enchant and uplift. Thanks again for reading and commenting.
My pleasure..you did what you were hoping to do…and beautifully!
Thanks again!!!
Wonderful to read your poetry again. This poem is heaven lent… beautiful.
Oh, thanks. That’s very beautiful of you to say!
Is just the truth. Hoping for more of your heavenly poems, soon! :))
This is beautiful! Love the last two lines. Funny how some people are so bright, they almost darken the other good things…
Thank you, Wardah. That’s an interesting point you make. I do think it’s really whats on the inside that makes people shine the brightest, though. And likewise, they can make you feel like you’re shining as well.
That’s very true, the inner light is what shines the brightest. And I agree. You’re welcome!!
Deep
Thanks.
Beautifully penned, Benjamin!
Thank you, Eugenia!
My pleasure!
Quite a praise. Awesome… hope it reached the intended recipient. Well done. 🤜🤛👍👍
Thanks, my friend!
I like this piece of poetry 🙂
Huge thanks!
🙂
Waoo 🤍 Lovely 🤍🤍🤍
Thanks 🙂
My pleasure 🤗❤️
Amazing writings❤️😊
Only you can paint such a poetic beauty in such few words Ben. 💟
Wow, thanks! 🙂
Nice words Benjamin…
Thank you!
No one can say it like you , Benjamin . Hey lady whoever you are I am dying to meet you. We all are as a matter of fact.
Haha. Thanks a lot, Yassy. 🙂
My pleasure, Benjamin—- Yasmin ~
Love the simple power.
Very thankful!!!