Heaven Lent

Every earthly thing
you (……….) eclipse
and even near stars
shine dark in comparison.

54 comments on “Heaven Lent

  1. Secret Bree's avatar Secrets says:

    Breathtakingly beautiful Ben. 👏

  2. Poetpas's avatar Poetpas says:

    Very nice Ben! A few lines can say a lot..

  3. Bellpepper's avatar Alina says:

    Lovely poem 👏

  4. Ingrid's avatar Ingrid says:

    I like the idea of something ’shining dark’ – it’s a great poetic image!

  5. gabychops's avatar gabychops says:

    A beautiful homage to Ra and someone you love.

    Thank you for your important message on my post/

    Thank you.

    Joanna

  6. Unknown's avatar R. says:

    Infinite hearts for the profound, amorous and soulfully poetic words! ❤️

  7. “Shine dark” – a great image!

  8. Cassa Bassa's avatar Cassa Bassa says:

    Love it in particular the title.

  9. Such a statement of love whispered through your poetic words…each one chosen, like the flowers in a bouquet to delight and let someone very special know, how loved they truly are!! So beautiful!

  10. My pleasure..you did what you were hoping to do…and beautifully!

  11. Lia's avatar Lia says:

    Wonderful to read your poetry again. This poem is heaven lent… beautiful.

  12. rosesandremedies's avatar wardah says:

    This is beautiful! Love the last two lines. Funny how some people are so bright, they almost darken the other good things…

    • Thank you, Wardah. That’s an interesting point you make. I do think it’s really whats on the inside that makes people shine the brightest, though. And likewise, they can make you feel like you’re shining as well.

      • rosesandremedies's avatar wardah says:

        That’s very true, the inner light is what shines the brightest. And I agree. You’re welcome!!

  13. judeitakali's avatar judeitakali says:

    Deep

  14. Eugi's avatar -Eugenia says:

    Beautifully penned, Benjamin!

  15. Quite a praise. Awesome… hope it reached the intended recipient. Well done. 🤜🤛👍👍

  16. msdedeng's avatar Msdedeng says:

    I like this piece of poetry 🙂

  17. asthaisha's avatar asthaisha says:

    Waoo 🤍 Lovely 🤍🤍🤍

  18. Olivia Ava's avatar Olivia Ava says:

    Amazing writings❤️😊

  19. Only you can paint such a poetic beauty in such few words Ben. 💟

  20. Nice words Benjamin…

  21. yassy's avatar yassy says:

    No one can say it like you , Benjamin . Hey lady whoever you are I am dying to meet you. We all are as a matter of fact.

  22. cindy knoke's avatar cindy knoke says:

    Love the simple power.

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