54 comments on “Heaven Lent

  1. Secrets says:

    Breathtakingly beautiful Ben. 👏

  2. Poetpas says:

    Very nice Ben! A few lines can say a lot..

  3. Alina says:

    Lovely poem 👏

  4. Ingrid says:

    I like the idea of something ’shining dark’ – it’s a great poetic image!

  5. gabychops says:

    A beautiful homage to Ra and someone you love.

    Thank you for your important message on my post/

    Thank you.

    Joanna

  6. R. says:

    Infinite hearts for the profound, amorous and soulfully poetic words! ❤️

  7. “Shine dark” – a great image!

  8. Cassa Bassa says:

    Love it in particular the title.

  9. Such a statement of love whispered through your poetic words…each one chosen, like the flowers in a bouquet to delight and let someone very special know, how loved they truly are!! So beautiful!

  10. My pleasure..you did what you were hoping to do…and beautifully!

  11. Lia says:

    Wonderful to read your poetry again. This poem is heaven lent… beautiful.

  12. wardah says:

    This is beautiful! Love the last two lines. Funny how some people are so bright, they almost darken the other good things…

    • Thank you, Wardah. That’s an interesting point you make. I do think it’s really whats on the inside that makes people shine the brightest, though. And likewise, they can make you feel like you’re shining as well.

      • wardah says:

        That’s very true, the inner light is what shines the brightest. And I agree. You’re welcome!!

  13. -Eugenia says:

    Beautifully penned, Benjamin!

  14. Quite a praise. Awesome… hope it reached the intended recipient. Well done. 🤜🤛👍👍

  15. Msdedeng says:

    I like this piece of poetry 🙂

  16. asthaisha says:

    Waoo 🤍 Lovely 🤍🤍🤍

  17. Olivia Ava says:

    Amazing writings❤️😊

  18. Only you can paint such a poetic beauty in such few words Ben. 💟

  19. Nice words Benjamin…

  20. yassy says:

    No one can say it like you , Benjamin . Hey lady whoever you are I am dying to meet you. We all are as a matter of fact.

  21. cindy knoke says:

    Love the simple power.

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