58 comments on “Moonlike

  1. Beautiful piece. Amazing as always, Benjamin. πŸ’•

  2. Lovely. You really know how to pack a lot into 18 little words.

  3. gabychops says:

    Clever, ODE TO THE SUN, Benjamin, as the light of the Moon comes from the reflecting the Sun.

    Thank you.

    Joanna

  4. Secrets says:

    Twinned light… Such a stunning phrase! The imagery is divine. Another beautiful piece to add to your fantastic collection πŸ‘

  5. Omg! Three lines masterpiece. So beautiful ❀️

  6. Diana says:

    Beautiful! Loved that last line, Ben! ❀❀

  7. Chris Hall says:

    Simple and lovely!

  8. crimsonposy says:

    Perfectly written.
    ❀

  9. VJ Knutson says:

    Poetically, perhaps (effective image) but I’d say you shine always.

    • Well, thanks. That’s very sweet of you to say. I think, everyone has the potential to be a star in their own way. Theoretically it would be awesome if everyone could be their own light, but also like the Beatles said: “Oh, I get by with a little help from my friends.”

  10. Ace says:

    Wow Ben, this is so beautiful. You captured so much emotion, depth and power in just a few words. And that last line is just divine ✨. Amazingly done, my friend πŸ’šπŸ’™

  11. abykittiwakewrites says:

    Gorgeous.

  12. yassy says:

    Love becomes more beautiful in your poetry, Benjamin. Lovely verse , my friend. Stay in love.. this amazing verses that you pen ..makes it all the more beautiful.

  13. Kritika says:

    ‘Twinned light’ super amazing weaving.

  14. beautiful and so relatableπŸ₯Ί

  15. Your longing is so evident here, my friend. Well done! 🌞

  16. Shanyu says:

    Three lines that say a lot.

  17. HensBlooms says:

    Very descriptive, stunning!

  18. Beautiful……πŸ’–

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