As if I’m the moon
I shine when and only when
I reflect the twinned light of you
As if I’m the moon
I shine when and only when
I reflect the twinned light of you
Just Write
A Mystical World
love each other like you are the lyric to their music
The flowers of the fiction plant rooted in my brain, the voice of the inexpressible feelings hidden in my heart and the eruption of the theories burning in my mind– I made a ball out of the three, threw it high into the sky and it landed right at my blog.
You're Worth It.
Sporadic randomness from a disheveled mind.
Utopian World
Beautiful piece. Amazing as always, Benjamin. 💕
Thanks, Grace! 🙂 I really appreciate all your kindness and support!
My pleasure.💕
Lovely. You really know how to pack a lot into 18 little words.
Thank you!!! Brevity and minimalism has power, I think.
“Brevity is the soul of wit” ~ Hamlet
Nice 🙂 I love love Shakespeare.
Clever, ODE TO THE SUN, Benjamin, as the light of the Moon comes from the reflecting the Sun.
Thank you.
Joanna
I perceived in this perspective too…
Yes, the sun is majestic and all-important. If you find your sun in life you’ve won better than anyone else ever could. Thanks for your thoughts! Stay well!
Twinned light… Such a stunning phrase! The imagery is divine. Another beautiful piece to add to your fantastic collection 👏
Thank you. If you can find someone who makes you shine and vice versa there is probably not much else on Earth or in space that is better. Thanks again!!! 🙂
Omg! Three lines masterpiece. So beautiful ❤️
Thanks!!! That’s really wonderful to hear! ❤️ Hope you’re having a fantastic day!
Beautiful! Loved that last line, Ben! ❤❤
Thank you so much, Diana! ❤❤❤
Simple and lovely!
Thanks a ton, Chris!!! And no clue why sometimes these comments go to spam!
Odd. I don’t know either. You’ve reminded me to check my spam too!
Perfectly written.
❤
Thank you!!! 🍀
It’s amazing how we shine when we have that “someone”.
❤
Agreed. To find someone who converts worries to sunshine: what magical feeling, that is!
100%.
❤
🙂
Poetically, perhaps (effective image) but I’d say you shine always.
Well, thanks. That’s very sweet of you to say. I think, everyone has the potential to be a star in their own way. Theoretically it would be awesome if everyone could be their own light, but also like the Beatles said: “Oh, I get by with a little help from my friends.”
True, and so much of life is traversed alone, so we need both I guess.
It is. We have to live with ourselves the most. Then again … I think Camus said (paraphrasing) hell is/would be like having to be by yourself in a dark room with only your own thoughts. But that’s a whole different topic. Thanks again for your thoughts!
Lol.
Wow Ben, this is so beautiful. You captured so much emotion, depth and power in just a few words. And that last line is just divine ✨. Amazingly done, my friend 💚💙
Thanks, Ace. I appreciate you a thousandfold! 💚💙 Have a glorious day!
Wow!
THANK YOU! 🙂
You’re welcome😄
🙂
Gorgeous.
Thanks you very much!!!!!!!!!
Love becomes more beautiful in your poetry, Benjamin. Lovely verse , my friend. Stay in love.. this amazing verses that you pen ..makes it all the more beautiful.
Wow, that’s very nice of you to say! That so sweet, really. Thanks a million times over! 🙂
Welcome a trillion times over 😎
🙂 🙂
🤭
‘Twinned light’ super amazing weaving.
Oh, thank you! 🙂 Feels good to know this.
Pleasure always 🙂 🙂
beautiful and so relatable🥺
Kind of you 🙂 Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!
Your longing is so evident here, my friend. Well done! 🌞
WOW! Thanks so much. I think, it’s good to long for the right things, if we really know they are good for us.
Three lines that say a lot.
Thanks, Shanyu! Means so much!
My pleasure friend. Have a fantastic day.
Very descriptive, stunning!
Thanks very very much!
Beautiful……💖
Very much thankful for you reading and commenting!!!!
As ever, you are very welcome