46 comments on “Divine Presence

  1. Wonderful piece, Benjamin. Love it!❤️

  2. Ahhhh my romantic friend…either you are so in-love in this very minute, or you have a fabulous memory, that can conjure up this feeling you just described…Either way..you have been blessed by this presence…You have written this engaging poem, from personal experience…and it sings love outloud…so cleverly beautiful Ben!❤️🤗❣️🌹

  3. Oh wow!! Absolutely lovely Ben, very few lucky ones can actually say that 😊❤️

  4. Filarance says:

    Woww!! That’s absolutely true my friend..! Very BEAUTIFULLY written..!😊😊

  5. Secrets says:

    What else is there to say, that others haven’t already said? Exquisitely and delicately crafted 👌

  6. crimsonposy says:

    This is lovely.
    ❤🌷

  7. Ace says:

    This is so deeply divine and beaming with love, Ben!! What a sweet piece! You always pack so much meaning and depth in a few short lines, it blows me away. Another gem, my friend. Always a treat to read your work 💚💙

  8. So nice to see you posting such a lovely, positive piece again, Ben! 🌞

  9. Wow!
    This is so pure
    In love with YoUr words, Starry-eyed writer

    • Thanks a lot. I’ve been finding myself falling for you r words, as well. There’s something natural about them. But there is something divine about your presence. You’re one of these people, I think, that would bless the place where they stand. Hope you are having a lovely Sunday, finding sunshine in everything.

  10. Cassa Bassa says:

    I love how the title of the poem is part of the climax ending of the poem.

  11. beautiful, and so well said in just a few words

  12. I love this Benjamin! Blessings! ♥♥

  13. Lovely! Beauty in brevity.

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