By Benjamin Grossman and Kritika Tanvi
Delicately close the distance between our pens
Stretch your words to fit within each sentence
Would you rhyme to make their rhythm intense?
Or would you let free moves to mesmerize with their dance?
Press your ink to the page without hesitation
Feel the scintillating words with sensation
Craft a letter that has never been written
Look at the two swords profoundly smitten
A phrase that has never been expressed
A love that awaits to be transgressed
Between the comma and the period
The opening and the final full stop
Show me the outline of your heart
Having sagaciously built the base
Patiently engrossed and embraced
The calmness of strength speaks for the aura of this beautiful art
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Thank you, Ben for this opportunity. It has been interesting to write on the random lines provided by you. This was a great experience to work with you. Thank you so much π
Thanks too. It turned out well. You turned a bunch of nothing into something. Much appreciation. π
Love this!
All thanks!!!
Well done you two…write more together. π€
Thanks. Only the future knows. Be well π
Beautifully written.
Thanks.
Two of my favourite poets. This makes me smile so much… Look what you created ππππ
Thanks a lot! It worked out thanks to Kritika. She really made the structure work.
Great collaboration! I love that first line especially: “Delicately close the distance between our pens”
Thank you. It’s nice to write with someone new and see how they create.