Routine

Got a new doctor
Checked my blood pressure
Off the charts
He was concerned
But I wasn’t
Since I was thinking of you
Ordered a CT scan of my heart next
It was unthinkably enlarged
The technician was gobsmacked
But I wasn’t
Since it housed my love for you
EKG came back abnormal, showed no activity whatsoever
The nurses were petrified
But I wasn’t
Since my heart only beats around you
They didn’t believe me, of course
Until you walked through the door

29 comments on “Routine

  1. wardah says:

    The repetition of “But I wasn’t” is amazing. And also the twist at the end?? That’s so awesome. I love it!

  2. Ah….I so loved the ending πŸ™Œ

  3. That’s so sweet. πŸ™‚

  4. yassy says:

    Damn good. I like the way you play the patient.

  5. uzzawal1911 says:

    This is great Benjamin! πŸ™Œ
    Beautiful and fun!πŸ‘Œ

  6. Cassa Bassa says:

    How very romantic Ben! πŸ’žπŸ‘πŸ’š

  7. This is so romantic, wow. The love and the commitment is literally radiating off your words! ✨

  8. scifihammy says:

    hahaha Loved this! Well done. πŸ˜€

  9. Lia says:

    Totes adorbes and the kind of woman we could all wish to be. πŸ‘πŸ’• Hoping all is well with thee. πŸ’›πŸ©Ί

  10. Katy Claire says:

    Always so creative and romantic, Benjamin. Love is endlessly inspirational and invigorating β™₯️

  11. Secrets says:

    Oh my goodness Ben, this is adorable πŸ’œ I love the story you crafted in this one πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

  12. Tom says:

    Haha, smart idea for a poem. Enjoyed! πŸ™‚

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