Got a new doctor
Checked my blood pressure
Off the charts
He was concerned
But I wasn’t
Since I was thinking of you
Ordered a CT scan of my heart next
It was unthinkably enlarged
The technician was gobsmacked
But I wasn’t
Since it housed my love for you
EKG came back abnormal, showed no activity whatsoever
The nurses were petrified
But I wasn’t
Since my heart only beats around you
They didn’t believe me, of course
Until you walked through the door
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Benjamin Grossman 
The repetition of “But I wasn’t” is amazing. And also the twist at the end?? That’s so awesome. I love it!
Thanks. Thanks. Thanks.
Ah….I so loved the ending 🙌
Than you!
That’s so sweet. 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Damn good. I like the way you play the patient.
Big thanks!
This is great Benjamin! 🙌
Beautiful and fun!👌
Appreciate it. Thanks.
How very romantic Ben! 💞👍💚
Thanks you 🙂
This is so romantic, wow. The love and the commitment is literally radiating off your words! ✨
Thanks. I know no other way, really. Some people show you they deserve love and commitment. And some people show you they deserve extra love and commitment. Think I found the latter. Hope you’ll have a wonderful week!
Ahhh, lucky you! It is so good you came across that. You too have a great week. ✨
It is lucky, for sure. Perhaps I’m the luckiest in the world. I think I could be, after all. But the key isn’t just to find love. It’s to keep it in your life and keep it growing thereafter. Thanks 🙂
Yes! I love your outlook towards life and love. It’s always good to hear your thoughts!
hahaha Loved this! Well done. 😀
Thanks! 🙂
😀
Totes adorbes and the kind of woman we could all wish to be. 👏💕 Hoping all is well with thee. 💛🩺
Thanks. I”m good. Wishing you well also.
🙂
Always so creative and romantic, Benjamin. Love is endlessly inspirational and invigorating ♥️
Agreed: love might be the most powerful thing under the sun. Thanks again.
Oh my goodness Ben, this is adorable 💜 I love the story you crafted in this one 👏👏👏
Thanks big time. Sorry for the late reply 🙂
Haha, smart idea for a poem. Enjoyed! 🙂
Thanks. Means a lot coming from a great poet like yourself!
So sweet and fun, your poems highlight the best of aspects of being in love💖🤗🌷
Thanks. This one was actually pretty fun to write!