50 comments on “Only So (Pt. I)

  1. Marlapaige says:

    I believe i can honestly say that this is a universal “ouch”

  2. Ace says:

    Wow Ben, this is just heartbreakingly beautiful. It’s simple but filled with deep emotion, I can feel each word. And very cleverly written with β€œcloud nine” and β€œground zero”…well done. You’ll get your heart back there, I promise. Keep shining and taking care of you πŸ’šπŸ’™

    • Thank you greatly, Ace. Your words are connected to the greater meaning, I think. And yes, everything returns back to balance. Thanks for all you say and all you are. πŸ’šπŸ’™

  3. Wow – that’s very clever! And as Marlapaige noted, a big β€œouch” as well.

  4. gabychops says:

    I love the cleverness of your writing,

    Thank you.


  5. Barbara Grossman says:

    Your heart is protected by the Love of your family.

  6. Kritika says:

    Arrangement of words. Clever write.

  7. Visually and emotionally powerful! Very creative, Benjamin! 🌞

  8. Love, Love, Love it , Benjamin. Very powerful! Excellent and unique word arrangement as well!!!❀️

  9. Secrets says:

    Good one Ben πŸ‘

  10. Very clearly put. Loved the mathematical form of the write-up. Brilliant job! β€οΈπŸ‘πŸ»

  11. Pt II- You will overcome your fear of loving and trusting again, you will stand tall, for yourself. Sure it will take time, but it will be your journey to remember, another new chapter to read and YOU will be defining YOURSELF again.
    I pray for you!

    • I like your Pt. II; it’s very uplifting. I don’t think that it is the way it’ll go for the poem, however. Though I really like everything you said; it’s important to love and trust in this lifetime. The only trouble is finding out which ones deserve it from us. And, I think: you’re very wise and endearing. Glad to know someone like you. You have such grace about you. I wish you the very best in all things. You deserve better than the best. Hope you’re doing well!

  12. Filarance says:

    Wow..! This si very clever Ben..!πŸ™‚

  13. MayankS says:

    Use of superscript is Nice πŸ‘

  14. Hey! Just reaching out to let you know that you’ve been nominated for the Sunshine Blogger Award:Β https://wordpress.com/post/graceofthesun.com/4066
    If your blog is award free, please disregard, I totally understand and am just taking this opportunity to show you how much I value your work. Much love and congratulations!

  15. Ouch! Nothing drops harder and farther than a broken heart. You express this so well Ben, in so many metaphoric ways.πŸŒΉβ€οΈπŸ€—

    • Yes, you can say that again. “When a heart is broken / There’s nothing to break.” – Robbie Williams. Thanks for your words. They lift me up in the best of ways. Have a great Saturday!

  16. Diana says:

    Wowza!! That’s quite a powerful few lines there!! Well formatted too! And also, well said! πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸŒΉ

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