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You took my heart to cloudnine
Only so you could drop it to groundzero
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I.
You took my heart to cloudnine
Only so you could drop it to groundzero
My word is goddess It's not an invitation But a prophecy
Inspired by Folk, Blues, Psychedelic Rock, Krautrock, Electronica, Punk, Industrial, and Noise Rock I make music alone and with friends since 1998.
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Benjamin Grossman 
I believe i can honestly say that this is a universal “ouch”
It sure is. There’s no away around that. Thanks for reading and comment!
Same to you 😊
🙂
Wow Ben, this is just heartbreakingly beautiful. It’s simple but filled with deep emotion, I can feel each word. And very cleverly written with “cloud nine” and “ground zero”…well done. You’ll get your heart back there, I promise. Keep shining and taking care of you 💚💙
Thank you greatly, Ace. Your words are connected to the greater meaning, I think. And yes, everything returns back to balance. Thanks for all you say and all you are. 💚💙
Wow – that’s very clever! And as Marlapaige noted, a big “ouch” as well.
THANK YOU!!!
I love the cleverness of your writing,
Thank you.
Joanna
Thank you, Joanna. Your constant support means so much!
Your heart is protected by the Love of your family.
Thanks, Mom. Love you! ❤️
Arrangement of words. Clever write.
Thank you forever! 🙂
My pleasure 🙂
Welcome 🙂
Visually and emotionally powerful! Very creative, Benjamin! 🌞
Much thanks, Lisa!!! Have a beautiful day!
You too! 🌞
Thanks 🙂
Love, Love, Love it , Benjamin. Very powerful! Excellent and unique word arrangement as well!!!❤️
Thanks for all you said, Grace! 🙂
Very welcome. Truly a pleasure.❤️
Good one Ben 👏
Thank you!!! Glad to get a message from the future every now and again, and see my words have some power there as well 😉
🤣🤣🤣 I’ll always be in your future 🤣🤣🤣
Oh, my, my, my! So true 🤣🤣🤣
Love this!
Thanks!!!!!
Very clearly put. Loved the mathematical form of the write-up. Brilliant job! ❤️👏🏻
Thanks a whole lot! Always nice to hear other’s thoughts. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment 🙂 Have a lovely day!
Pt II- You will overcome your fear of loving and trusting again, you will stand tall, for yourself. Sure it will take time, but it will be your journey to remember, another new chapter to read and YOU will be defining YOURSELF again.
I pray for you!
I like your Pt. II; it’s very uplifting. I don’t think that it is the way it’ll go for the poem, however. Though I really like everything you said; it’s important to love and trust in this lifetime. The only trouble is finding out which ones deserve it from us. And, I think: you’re very wise and endearing. Glad to know someone like you. You have such grace about you. I wish you the very best in all things. You deserve better than the best. Hope you’re doing well!
Ah yes! I got it. Haha! That’s very kind of you.
I’m doing well
I hope you’re doing well too.
Awesome; it’s good to hear this (that you’re doing well). Stay safe. Have a great night!
Wow..! This si very clever Ben..!🙂
Thanks big time!!! 🙂
My pleasure..!
Use of superscript is Nice 👍
Thanks! 🙂
Hey! Just reaching out to let you know that you’ve been nominated for the Sunshine Blogger Award: https://wordpress.com/post/graceofthesun.com/4066
If your blog is award free, please disregard, I totally understand and am just taking this opportunity to show you how much I value your work. Much love and congratulations!
Thanks a lot. So cool that you thought of me on this. I do do these awards sometimes. Hopefully I can get around to it. Thanks again. Much love and peace. Have a lovely weekend!
You are very welcome.Have a great weekend too! Enjoy!💕
Ouch! Nothing drops harder and farther than a broken heart. You express this so well Ben, in so many metaphoric ways.🌹❤️🤗
Yes, you can say that again. “When a heart is broken / There’s nothing to break.” – Robbie Williams. Thanks for your words. They lift me up in the best of ways. Have a great Saturday!
Wowza!! That’s quite a powerful few lines there!! Well formatted too! And also, well said! 👍👌🌹
Thanks so much! Always cool to see your thoughts!
Excellent!
Thanks again, really!
You are very welcome